Wednesday, 26 October 2011

Comic 969 - Delta-P



The Pevensies' littlest daughter
Went hiding where she didn't oughtta
Then turned on the tap
And went for a nap
And Narnia flooded with water.

Original comic here.

[Edited the next day for scansion and spelling.]
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2 comments:

  1. Ann ApolisOctober 28, 2011 2:58 pm

    An edit? D'you mean you don't care
    About readers' nostalgic welfare?
    I treat with derision
    This kind of revision
    Resemblant of Eric A. Blair

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  2. Edward "Limerick" LearOctober 29, 2011 3:32 pm

    I see what you're saying there, Ann
    But the fact is the line didn't scan.
    I'd much rather have checked it
    Than come back and correct it
    But it's done now, so lay off me, maaaaaaan.

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